One of my favorite PvP builds:
http://goo.gl/dZ1Ooz
If you want to play with general - try something like this:
http://goo.gl/lh5Gue
With your build very hard to be dangerous for anyone:
1. You have lost all addtitional CC - slow from Staggering Voice and Fangs. Any Barb, Sin, Carnage conq, BS can push you without any problems. Coz they have antiroot in build or general tree and minimum 1 antiCC from AA. They can CC you and you can't CC them = you always lose.
Any caster would just run away after you silence him without Staggering Voice.
2. An additional you have lost PoSR - Be ready to be favorite target for each Sin, DT, HoX and other mages which play on your server. Is it a really hard to use it for you? Just press it when you see demo with WoF, when you see how DT deal massive damage to you, when HoX casting Tongue or FL, when Sin use his Bomb, and a lot of situation.
3. You have lost all your burst and massive damage abilities - like EF, instant LS, Column. So - you can't be really dangerous for most of good geared enemies.
These burst abilities can bring you 10-15-20 additional kills in every minigame.
For example: it looks like Sin which use only Swift Strikes in PvP.